I love this story! I really recommend it! And I hope the author has time to finish the story!
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HAHA! keep it up. I really don't give my review in any novel. I just sign in to comment on this novel. it is a really good novel. I like the character most. the development and mindset of mc are also quite good.[img=update]
Yup! plz more updates.
Update as much as you can. it will be very beneficial to you as well as the reader. Don't keep us in suspense.
Good luck for your novel.
Decent story.
The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine.
The grammar and punctuation can be improved.
There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion.
Anyway, good luck with the story.
this is quite good novel. i like the the main caracter and the world. plz update more chapter. i think other will also like it. heeeeeeeeeeeeee.
There also comedy, i hope there more in future.....................
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Update as much as you can. it will be very beneficial to you as well as the reader. Don't keep us in suspense.
Good luck for your novel.
I want to know more about this novel.
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The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine.
The grammar and punctuation can be improved.
There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion.
Anyway, good luck with the story.
There also comedy, i hope there more in future.....................