The Mystic Empires of Ayan

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Cursta_Oywa
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.2 / 5.0, 19 votes)
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2(11%)
4 stars
4(21%)
3 stars
8(42%)
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5(26%)
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  1. DylanHusandg30
    DylanHusandg30 rated it
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    Good fan fic its a world hoping novel so its even betterWriting is okey there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but very rarelyOverall good novel author is not in a hurry to introduce big or OP world right at the beginning, it starts slow at least the first and the second worlds but it is starting to pick upGood luck
  1. SuCiDeshit
    SuCiDeshit rated it
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    why is it the same as I Beg You All, Please Shut Up.... not coolwhy is it the same as I Beg You All, Please Shut Up.... not coolwhy is it the same as I Beg You All, Please Shut Up.... not coolwhy is it the same as I Beg You All, Please Shut Up.... not cool
  1. Maochan02
    Maochan02 rated it
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    Honest Rating 4.At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest pointsAlso grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.With that being said I think this
  1. WoodenPaw
    WoodenPaw rated it
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    Really really really horrible translation here. It is so bad that I can not even properly enjoy the novel at all. As a translator myself I would like to comment:Do the translation properly, no half-assed attempt where you combine chinese and english and pinyin and whatnot altogether into an amalgamation of rubbish.You are letting down the author, the novel, the readers and the face of the Chinese-translating community with a substandard translation.
  1. CooolFire
    CooolFire rated it
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    Good book straight up fire best novel ive seen some translation issues but that’s it I hope you can make the chapter update more though but that’s the only problem I have good luck author👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼🙇🏽🙇🏽🙇🏽🙇🏽
  1. CheekyForehead
    CheekyForehead rated it
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    Its fun, very entertaining and has a bit of slice of life genre. Its a good novel for passing out time relaxing and that though its kinda boring in some parts that i cant explain it lacks something that i cant express in words.
  1. ChakraLord
    ChakraLord rated it
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    When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories
  1. Icomittedarson
    Icomittedarson rated it
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    Just want to read 10 minutes but story was good so I want to read more 😍
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