Writing quality sub-par
Still not updated after 4 month
Story development is mostly smooth.
I have to say character design 6/10
Not much of the world background is written.
But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.
Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.
A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.
I have read many interesting novels, but this is the first time writing one, I have no experience in writing so please try continue to read,the reason I am writing the novel I liked TNE, The Academy’s Deceased Ate It All, lastly Author POV I liked academy life of main character in all this novel, while reading these novel many thoughts popped up, I am just trying to put my thoughts into a book,in feature my thoughts can run wildly please endure. If there is any corrections please mention on comments. thankyou
my updates will be regular from next week
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Still not updated after 4 month
Story development is mostly smooth.
I have to say character design 6/10
Not much of the world background is written.
But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.
Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.
A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.
my updates will be regular from next week