Love it so far but most likely won’t finish this book either I have like twenty book started that I will most likely won’t get to finish cuz one dam book costs more then my power bill and that sucks so thank for all the sneak peek’s and hopefully a few book that will be published in paperback
mc is supposed to be smart but all he does is court death, I'm not sure if he doesn't care or he just does not think at all. Another annoying one is his childhood sweetheart who keeps appearing throughout the novel just to threaten the mc or be annoying. honestly everything about this novel is just full of cliche and terribly written.
Great. I don’t have much to say since I don’t particularly like this genre but the horror was abysmal to say. I know it’s quite non-existent in the first 60 chapters, but the detail is quite expressive. The only thing I find great imo is the character design. It’s impressive.
I like the story so far but im confused about the world background is it a martial one with cultivators or a super power one cause the author didn't write about it, am wrong?
Given the relatively high rating, i was hoping that this might be an interesting novel. I was wrong. I did insist a little, but i really couldn't read too much chapters. A waste of my limited life :(In terms of originality, you can forget about it. The same thing for writing quality and characters development.This could be balanced with the MC. Unfortunately, after this MC died miserably and reincarnated for another chance against the "heavens
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A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly. Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh. But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
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