I'm at 260 and somehow I feel like there's already so much filler, mainly the interaction between the MC's friends feel like filler. I find the powering concept to have a lot of potential, but how naive the MC is really bummed me out. Might just be because I'm looking for something with deeper meaning than a comedic relief.Can someone also let me know if the writing style going to change to a more serious tone or is it going to stay comical throughout the rest? I really want to give it another chance but I'm a lil skeptical now.
No typical young master s*it so far and I hope author will continue the same in his future updates. Nedd more more..................................................................................................................................................
Honestly the story bis really good, and though it is sometimes cliche, it's able to stand out, what make it even better is the fact it's not a harem story, I'm so tired of those. the story is long enough for you to enjoy it l, with enough mysteries that keep you wanting to know more. At first nothing really happened, the mc never got into fights and it was more mystery after mystery, but now the Mc gets into fights and some mysteries were solved. also each character has at least a background, the only problem is that the you will never learn more about a character you focus some much on yang su, I kinda forget about the others, there is also so much happening in the story so it's hard to tell where the plot is going to go next. I also think that if the author is going to show romance, please don't focus to much on it, because when I read this I want to focus on the action, the story and romance is fine, but when your story is mostly action with no romance and all of a sudden there is a whole chapter dedicated to romance, it feels weird and random. but this is just my opinion, I am but one out of...... a lot.
please do not make a new romance with a ***** person who never deviates!I love your novel, some passage are funnybut make evolve your mc, especially a child of 7 years, it is curious and learns quickly, you can also make him undergo misunderstanding, as you evolve for my part I think it will add a soul to your novel.
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