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I dont get why ppl were complaining abt how the MC was nerfed in the story, this at first led me to not wanting to read it but i buckled down and read it, the story actually tellls u why he was nerfed and if u dont get the reason why he was nerfed then dude/ette u will need to get ur brain checked. Other than that, I found no problems with the writing quality or anything for that matter wrong with it except the part where the MC doesn't want to read through his predecessors knowledge bcuz he fears he will lose himself which seems like a pretty dumb reason when he could die at any moment if he gets caught or lacks a certain skill or piece of knowledge that could get him out of that situation.
first 4 chapters are fine but 5th chapter has things that I am not a fan of ... like putting religious promotions in the story . I came to read a novel not a religious doctrine , don't want to sink into that swamp . will come back to read more later. maybe its not as bad as I think it is....
My biggest question is why has this singular book been the limited free book at least 3-4 times in the last two weeks? Plenty of better stories and this one does have poor americanization built in.
Err... Who here knows what this story is about?Ideas anyone...I only rated so I can find out what the story is about.Can't I just write what I have to say without having a headache over how many characters I typed?
Interesting idea, but the writing/ editing needs a bunch of work. Everything is choppy and makes it uncomfortable to read. When the author tries to describe things it becomes wordy, description is good, but it needs to make sense and not be so awkward.
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