every chapter is boring. to the writer, can you please write a better story? Please come up with a better one. This line of story is not worth our time
"Are you okay? Can you walk?" he asked him. The boy nodded and stood up with Anju's assistence. Anju gave him the apple. "One lady wanted me to give you this." The boy was very hungry so he begun to eat the apple immediately. While Anju was waiting on the boy to finish his apple, he thought *Was that a reason why you sent me here? You knew what was happening because of your demon senses.* It made sense. That's why she told him she was an old exhausted lady. The boy finished and Anju told him. "We can't stay here. That mean guy can return any second and we don't want more trouble, do we?" He would probably be able to deal with him again but he didn't want to waste more time there. He got an idea. "Come with me." The boy nodded and they both left the street.
the Mc is so stupid it's not even funny.. 12 chapters in and he's still stupid.. and the smartest thing he did is wish for wisdom..knowledge and comprehensiveness.. but he's still stupid.. like how can you have all that and be so specially stupid.. even while free I can't read this.. such a shame
This story has a lot of epic royal fantasy vibes. I would say fans of game of thrones or the remarried empress would enjoy it. The star gem aspect is also interesting, keep up the good work!
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