Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Love what's going on with the story, not your usual evil mc novel as it actually shows what lead to the characters decision to take the road to the dark side. The action is riveting, the descriptions are clear, just an overall amazing read.
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Hey, I'm shallowheart, the author of The Legend of The Shadow Emperor. I am not well versed in writing and believe I have a lot of room to grow. I hope to a obtain your support in making this novel great and I also ask for you to comment on my work and help me to point out my errors to help me become a better author
This novel was recommended to me by a friend not too long ago and I hesitated to check it out. Surprisingly the first chapter got me. I am now at the latest chapter as I have just finished reading it, I hope this novel will grow into something wonderful.
I like the whole atmosphere of this story. It draws you in from the very beginning and allows you to visualize every movement and action of the characters. Characters are well thought out, and personality traits are relateable.
However, I've spotted a few grammatical errors, but they don't take way from the story. You might want to go through the chapters and correct a few errors, just to improve readability.
I seriously loved the details and transitioning of this novel. I was able to have a clear picture of what was taking place and I enjoyed reading it. My problem with this novel would be the updating speed. I am looking forward to your updates[img=update]
The sudden increase in tention actually surprised me because this novel had started giving me a relaxed feeling (and kinda boring) xD but the minor plot twist in your latest chapter was actually refreshing and enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work @Shallowheart
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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However, I've spotted a few grammatical errors, but they don't take way from the story. You might want to go through the chapters and correct a few errors, just to improve readability.
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