The Lecherous Cultivation System

Awesome story building and one of the best lemons I have read in a while keep it up and this will get big someday good luck

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I'm giving my novel 5 stars.

A lecherous system and a perverted protagonist in a cultivation world with all kinds of beautiful women for the picking.

Does this novel not deserve 5 stars?

Praying to the author, thank you for this novel you have written for your devoted readers. We will read with all our might, promote with all our might, and help you raise through the rankings. Brothers and sisters, let us band together against gods, devils, dragons, hell, and heaven to land at No. 1. Let this pray end. Amen.

Looking for stupid MC?
Looking for "I will do stupid things and get a setback but it will be fortune for me, MC?
Then this novel is for u! *Clap clap*

Neeeeeeddddd moooooorrrreee               

Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in...

Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla bla

Next paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla bla

Next paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla bla


Critics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read.

Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day.

Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc.


Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery.


World Background: 5/5- Very Good!

*****
Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.

Starting is great but after that chapters size started to get small and in last few chapters author is doing lot of forced plots which has changed the story and made the MC a big idiot..