Finally a different type of novel, this time the mc has a wife and a child so no heaven toppling country destroying beauty that suddenly falls inlove with a dirt poor kid from a countryside thanks to a system then gets another 10 beauties. okay im done ranting hoping this would get picked.
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
Unless he writes a normal novel without any magic or cultivation or high tech or evolution, he is going to blow himself up due to the pure amount of energy in his body
One of the worst things I have ever read on webnovel Oo.The Idea was great and I loved the concept. Unfortunately, the translation is seriously bad and the plot is very weak. I don't even know where to start...The reincarnation process is bearable but acceptable, world introduction is quite short. Main char is supposed to have inherited memories of the body he inherited in, but does not always use these memories? Names are thrown everywhere without properly introducing characters. As it is in most other novels, the money system is not thought through and is not correctly used. If the other defines a system he/she should at least be able to follow the system... . The leveling aspect ist quite nice, i guess. Can't really complain about that one. Society is the classic chinese/eastern dick-move society, where "weaker levels" in cultivation are trampled on, insulted and not regarded as worthy living. So yeah, overall quite ****ty that one. The idea alone would have deserved more stars, but the execution really made this bad. It's a shame..
Hello friends!! Hisao's journey is not over yet. Have to wait for vol.2 of this novel to know the update of his life journey. This journey will be more complicated and disturbing than you ever knew but it will have a happy ending for someone who never stops believing and never gives up on their life. Don't give up and keep going!!😘🥰🤗
Sorry for those who were hyped about this being a new chapter but don't fret I am happy to announce chapters 1,2,3 are finished updating and chapters 4 and 15 are halfway updated
"GOOD MORNING ICHIGO!" Ichigo heard as he leaned forward to get up. Just as he leaned forward something or someone rather came flying through his open window and flew just past the back of Ichigo's head before crashing into the closet. Ichigo then looked over to see who was stupid enough to actually do that and saw his dad laying on the floor. "Wow, you certainly improved, Ichigo. I'm impressed you were able to dodge my welcome home kick," his dad said before jumping to his feet.
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