Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story...
The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine".....
Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores....
But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....
Pretty nice story progress. Loving the limitless potential and the various wonders in the world. Like the "cultivation" system as well.
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Shamless 5 star rating because i really do love this book. It's a great book and I would recommend this book to anyone who is tired of the standard wuxia novel, this is the book to read.
5 stars from me. Absolutely one of my top 10 favorite books. The characters are bold and brave. The MC is cunning and isn't easily manipulated like others. He is strong but not OP. I would recommend this book to anybody. I just hope the author can keep this up for a long time without going premium.
You should write brother more chapters and plot and chapters settings and very well made keep the good work going. I like the concept of mind palace and all the different energies you write and all their different use,I can tell you research in this field deeply
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I like how MC using his brain but when needs his strength is good..
And i like the supporting character....
The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine".....
Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores....
But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....
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Fuck why do they have to do this to us 140 characters