Poor MC drug consumption leads to confusing what others say is good for life with reality. At least the voices haven't started yet. By the way +50 vision is a tremendously useless skill.
overpowered annoying female charactersthe first one was still finethe second one, his teacher , I quitdropped out at chapter 66why just why whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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There are entire chapters misplaced and there are only 40 chapters right now. The consistency is nonexistent, and the experience gain doesn’t make sense. There are too many early time jumps that don’t make sense. Does not seem like there is much planning for the future
Writing Quality: It seems to be quite well written with some grammatical errors, however, they are within the acceptable range and they do not make you want to stop reading.Stability of Updates: Can't say much about that one as I have just begun reading this novel.Story Development: I feel like the pace isn't fast nor slow, as we can the story progressing quite well.Character Design: It's really good (in my opinion) as it seems that the Mc will go under a multitude of changes in the upcoming chapters.World Background: Information is slowly starting to come out as I read the chapters and it seems interesting for the most part.Overall, I'd say that this a novel worth reading.
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