I am the writer of this work and I give myself 10 over 10 because I believe that my novel is unique and uncommon.
To prove that am doing a excellent job
NOTE:
50% male readers
10% female readers
40% other readers
It is not easy to capture the readers attention especially males and sorry but no there's no romance maybe a little flirting but the Main character goes solo.
Read the description and for anymore questions comment below.
Enjoy
I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up!
Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.
This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions!
It’s so poorly written I couldn’t get past the first chapter. I stopped at the conversation with his mother. I understand this is the author’s first book, but why publish the first uneditted draft? It’s not a fun read when I’m editing as I read.
Popular Reviews
I am the writer of this work and I give myself 10 over 10 because I believe that my novel is unique and uncommon.
To prove that am doing a excellent job
NOTE:
50% male readers
10% female readers
40% other readers
It is not easy to capture the readers attention especially males and sorry but no there's no romance maybe a little flirting but the Main character goes solo.
Read the description and for anymore questions comment below.
Enjoy
I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up!
Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.
This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions!
Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.
Best, Ikaris
P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!