A genuinely good read so far. Looks like the author's shooting for 1-2 chapters daily, which is a great pace. The writing is also great, it gives a lot of context without being an absolute info dump. Other than the slow start (Chapters 1-2, and a bit of 3), this story really does have good potential. Solid 9/10 for me, highly recommended.
As a new author, this story is surprisingly detailed. It definitely starts off slow but that's the appeal as it seems like every little single detail is explained. And it's explained in a pretty good way too.
And it also seems like the author is updating 2 chapters daily? (I hope) with consistent updates, I think this novel can succeed.
This is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.
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And it also seems like the author is updating 2 chapters daily? (I hope) with consistent updates, I think this novel can succeed.
This is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.