The Incarnation of the Demon Prince

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"W-Why?!"

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So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

"Hey Bro! Did you enjoy my birthday present?"

Nicely done...Keep up the good work.i see good potential in this story though too much cliche to someone become rich like that .It seems like a fantasy .

So far so the story is really interesting. I like the fun interactions with the system too. MC's growth seems promising and of course there's always room for improvement, world background is really good too. All in all, it's a good read. Keep writing, Author!

I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own

I will give it 3 out of 5.The first few chapters are good then mc's personality suddenly changes, from then on there are some good chapters and some bad ones, if the story was written in a serious tone like few first chapters then it would be a gem.