Great writing quality, just needs a bit more work on the world background. But still, very nice updating stability but go to sleep for once. By the way, perhaps you'll need a proof-reader~
Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going
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