well there nothing that needs to pointed out needing fixing good job on that. the story is quite interesting to read and I like to keep on reading more along with future chapters to come again great job.
"What will happen if the shareholder who Atheist and full of sins with their breaking many taboos agreed the use Arabic letters? what will happen if a lot of apostle and prophet name used in game? well, you can try to guess it easily, it will create a chaos by emergence a lot of muslim, hindus and others religion. and those many taboos breaker will kill anyone that condemn them, then the family of the victim will try got their revenge, when those Atheist killed, their own family will also get revenge for them, then this will become war, the war will never end, many will be killed, the circled of hatred will keep continue and will never end! they! The Atheist with pinnacle power will eventually need to drastic method! they will use Satellite Cannon, Sun Cannon, Super Nuclear Weapon, Deadly Bio Weapon, Cyborg, Super Android, Machine King, Mobile Suit and others dangerous weapon to Exterminate them all!! if the war happen the earth will be Half Destroyed!!" a Strong killing intent can be felt from the goddess body and her hair moving like a strong wind blowing it from below her.
"Sir! We've arrived at Arlong Park. What would you like us to do?" The marine soldier asked. He was in the standard saluting position as any lower ranked officer should.
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