This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4.It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese.Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.
Awesome story, I’ve binged it over the last few days and must say that this is one of the best novels I’ve read so far. Shoutout to the author who delivers such a masterpiece for free
Only way I see this having been picked is due to the ease of translation. Half the novel is word filler of repeated messages about his element points that aren't even different, his whole point of getting strong is for his new fiancée that he gets in chapter 1 yet you don't see her for 10 chapters at a time. I think his fiancée has less screen time than her own father. The love enemy fodder 'Donald' has more screen time than the fiancée despite dying randomly 15 chapters in. He had 1,000 failures towards smithing in a row, yet once he gets the system he hasn't failed without forced interuption. No explanation as to why he suddenly turned into a god smith. System didn't give him any smithing talent. All it did was make him stronger, which mind you, we don't even know the combat system. All we know is that the novel is not good.
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Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!
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ok. this is a good story to me, and I like the bully girl x bullied boy plot. please don't drop this cause it's really good that I keep thinking on what happened to the characters.
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