The Great Road to The Underworld

Wow! An amazing read. I felt I was being carried along gently on ride reminiscent of a magic carpet ride. Thoroughly enjoyable by all standards. Well done author.

I just wanted to say, thankyou. Reading a new kind of story really takes the tension off of my day.
I am very immersed in this writing. Although the story has confusing parts, everything is explained as time goes by.
Fantastic work by author.

The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential.

Character design is also okay.

The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb.

Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved.

Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.