Sect building - checkMC dimensional place like he can bring people inside -checkLoving and loyal ally - checkClever MC -checkTransmigration- checkMedical knowledge of MC - checkFormation and inscriber MC - checkMC meticulous planner - checkUnique profound vein and arts - checkMysterious Background -checkWorld background and development - c heckMC development checkMC sometimes perveted mind --heckYour addicion reading this novel - check
So far I'm on chapter 74 and it's really good. Something things are annoying though. 1. There's no tags so fewer people are going to find the book. 2. The MC is pretty good but I want him to accept more disciples/assistants/minions and give them unique [Dao Foundations] pertaining to their specialties. Maybe even make a sect/guild/group that's only requirement is a very high comprehension. Also would a mixture of [Time Dao] and [Karma Dao] = Time Travel? 3. I would prefer if the author put important stuff in brackets [] like cultivation realms, sects, groups, contienants, etc because it's easier to read that way. Heres my major questions, can he use the time dao to speed up the growth of medical plants, and can he use it to look into the past.
Im glad to be reading this since I have never written my own story before..And to think my friends recommened this to me! I hope to shock them in the near future!I hope to achieve my goal!! Thank you very much for making this.I shall follow every step!
Another story with an interesting premise but bad writing. The author doesn’t understand the concept of flow, so the writing is very choppy as a result. And the writing itself seems like it was probably written by a young teen. I would recommend passing on this one.
intriguing system .. well written .. hope mc uses his system more and author clearly explains cultivation levels , world background and levels ,powers . Mainly everyone goes for system levels for quick pace story, clearly visible stats and levels .. which author needs to work on ...MC has max level appraisal .. but never uses it even when he meets new people now thats just dumb , but system recently got upgraded lets see whats ahead chapter 70
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