Awesome book! I am so glad I had the opportunity to read it!Well laid-out characters in a very well-written setting alongside good dialogues.Love the book! Keep writing, author-san!
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The setting seems interesting and it has potential but needs serious editing. There are lots of grammar mistakes and unnecessarily long sentences here and there.
Great story. The plot is very niceThe character design is almost perfect because of the mixture of teenage experiences. I think you must also make the character tougher to help with his development.The grammatical errors are alittle too much!Make sure to edit your story before you post them.However, your story is very nice and even though I don't really like martial arts stories, yours is the first one I really like.Keep I up!
Author supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters.An action Weak to strong story as the character Evolves completing tasks that only chen rui and otaku would do.
I have to say that this is one amazingly well written story with a rich degree of detail and a most entertaining and unusual main character of an elderly female engineer getting immersed into a virtual game world. The author has crafted something quite breathtaking here and now that I've read up to the most recent chapter after binging from the start I will be anxiously awaiting each new chapter release.
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