Not seen any novels on here with a black main Character #BLM I think I started reading the minute I saw the Jamaica flag, not yo take away from the fact this is already one of my favourite reads and I haven't even caught up yet.
The pace of the story is amazing although there is a little to be desired due to short chapters.
I would recommend to anyone who likes fantasy and wuxia.
Who could imagine an author to take a Mouse and raise a Dragon.
A good read and a very likeable Mc. Since the author is new it makes it even more interesting. Please continue with more chapters as I am really liking it so far.
A very well done book with amazing character Interactions, plot development, and world design. There are some errors now and then bit this is not uncommon with original books either.
Pros:
+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell
+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much
+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from cliches
Cons:
- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor
- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE
- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader?
- Not many POVs explored to expand on world building
Conclusion:
It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)
I’m on chapter 52 and I’ll tell you author; I love your novel so far, everything is so smooth, and the way the MC and FL carry themselves is just perfect. I just hope that there is not much time separation between them where one leaves and comes back like 100 years later. Overall, I love it.
Popular Reviews
The pace of the story is amazing although there is a little to be desired due to short chapters.
I would recommend to anyone who likes fantasy and wuxia.
Who could imagine an author to take a Mouse and raise a Dragon.
+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell
+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much
+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from cliches
Cons:
- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor
- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE
- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader?
- Not many POVs explored to expand on world building
Conclusion:
It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)
Sincerely,
RobespierreK
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