The God of the Undead

I love this book already! The characters personality fits perfectly considering he’s a skeleton, and I find the way the world is set up very interesting. I hope the author keeps on posting!

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How should I say this, I enjoy the early chapters as it feel better in structure and goals despite a lot of plot holes.
There are a lot of grammar error especially the "you, you are, your" family, it did not bother me that much as I'm non native english speaker but I need to call the author about it so he can improve his writting.
The world background let say vague at best, there is not a lot being told or explain. There are some good and famous areas being told but not in great detail either.
The characters design are rather bland with a little bit of interesting twist, but they are all pretty much did not have good development.
The creatures so far are pretty much forgotten, like how the zombies can evolve but MC only evolve the dog -> wolf and that's it, nothing else. So the variety is extremely lacking.
The story was thrown down the drain, I feel like there are a lot of unexplain time skip like how the MC all of sudden control pretty much most of the world within few days. How there is no opposition at all and how the author only touch minor characters that will change nothing for the fate of the world.
Overall, I enjoy my time reading it but the flaws are obliviously as long as I use a little bit of brain power. Interesting idea, messy excecution.

Note : I don't know if I want to continue reading this or not as the longer it goes, the less excited I got.

I wish I could give this a higher score... The idea of this story is interesting. The Mc is starting a zombie apocalypse, kind of.

Too bad its not very good. Characters are bland, plot developments aren't very interesting. Overall just kind of a dull story, really.

I love this story sick man. What level of depravity must be In your mind to write this. Sike I've done worse in my head. hahaha. keep this up I love it.

Good book but the updates are so slow. I got hooked but then I had to a wait a week for the next chapter to come out. Also the books always from different people and not always the main character. It’s good to do this but you do it way to much author

Great, just don't drop it. OK
Make mc eviler.
Selfish, strong........pragmatic, no moral, no humanity
A person who does things for his own interest without care for the world and the people.

First off, despite the rating this is not by any means a bad story, it has issues but it has qualities of redemption.

Firstly the writing quality, I understand English is not everyone's first language but this book screams machine translation. Poor grammar, misspelt words that sound the same vocally abound. Quite frankly I got through half the released chapters (37 actual, 4 Q & As) and was gonna drop it on how badly the engrish became. Honestly author including the abbreviations and the full word in several places shows a distinct lack of proof reading.

Story Development, decent if rushed. Typical zombie apocalypse yet there is literally tons of unanswered questions on how John spreads the virus worldwide from one hick town.

Character Design, I literally dislike everyone. John, Dixie, Alexia, Alice, James, Candice... all prime characters who lack any relatable or endearing quality. John starts off as a tragic hero MC but soon goes full angst evil bitch.

Updating Stability, from what I've seen updates happen, my biggest issue is wasting chapters on question and answer sections, seriously webnovel books have a specific chapter setting for this sort of thing that does not require breaking up the story or having 41 chapters but the latest title being chapter 37. LEARN TO USE THE SITE AUTHOR

World Background... nothing is explained. Yes its the world we live in but everything is just FBI this, police that. The zombie general attacks the white house which seems to lack any defenses just so the author can massacre president "Grump". Alot is glossed over to force plot.

In closing, the book isn't bad. The premise starts off great... its just i feel someone coated the sled bottom in no stick spray before rushing down the hill, the speed is going at break neck pace with no ability to enjoy the ride. When it stops it won't be to a kid laughing in wild fun, it'll be to tears on a good premise rushed and squandered.