Hello! This is the author who is shamelessly reviewing his novel! I wanted to say that I will do a mass release of 5 chapters if we reach 100 power votes. So sorry for the grammatical errors and I already edited it so you won't encounter something like that. Please do give me some suggestions on how to improve it. thank you for reading and have a great day!
I'll be honest to you author the story sacrificed character and world building to be a fast paced leveling and power ups the synopsis, prologue, and reason are all just tropes. the story is full of cliches which is not bad if used correctly but every character in your story are all 1 dimensional as I'm currently reading so to those who want to read this you need to turn off your brain to enjoy it think of the mc as you playing a character in a game not a character in a story.
I don't care abt the hate comments. I know that you already founded your foundations so you can't make some major changes so the thing you can at least do is to improve. The first chapters have flaws, I can clearly see that the logic we think is different in here. However, despite of all that flaws, the story still managed to hook me up because of the FUN. A pure fun. You don't mind the errors, but just go with the flow. I know that people can't see the plot but at least there is FUN in there. People already forget what is fun and just focus on errors. We can clearly see that this is the root of author's improvement. Such flaws can't be fixed in the past so at least try to mold the future. Hope that the author can at least plan before write, that us at least the suggestion I can give.
Honestly, the story is too fast paced. I mean we know nothing about the MC and the world. To be fair I only read 5 chapters but i dont like how fast paced it is. I hope you do well on your book.
I'm sure you won't be bored in reading this! this is a work of art! it has a lot of potentials! Both system and a goblin mc is fun to read. I want the author to update more!
honestly ita too much like the levels and the system and everything is just too overpowering and it doesnt have that tag the synopsis makes it seem like itll be way harder than what it is for the mc and well everything kinda just falls in his lap the characters hold barely substance in their personalities and the mc "remembers" all hes done on earth which is alot but it happens at random times ig the author was trying to flush out his character more but like it didnt work and was kinda annoying after a bit like ik mc is a genius amd what not but like again remembering all that stuff should have been in the beggining instead of in the middle also and he just gets to op to soon and his personality well what i can make of it at least is to say erratic not ero but like chaotic and never really focusses on one thing or another story doesnt feel natural at all and im more than comfy with isekie
Even though the idea of the world that the novel built upon is not completely new and unique, it is a good read. The plot is interesting, but sometimes I feel the MC unusual know it all. The characters might need more design. However, I only read just ten chapters. Will keep reading more. I will update the review when I read more.
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