Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,....anyway goodluck and goodshow
There's no racism (so far), a tiny bit of nationalism* and a fairly interesting premise**. Unfortunately It's not worth reading maybe it'll improve but I don't hold much hope.*The nationalism is mild and inside the simulation and none has been shown outside the simulation.**I especially like how the character acknowledges the consequences to everyone's mindset after entering a simulation.
Im currently about 80 chapters in and it feels like the writing quality has gone down a bit after each chapter. Writing quality - 2 -Pretty lackluster, overall "its in english" but the wording could be chosen better to create a smoother sentance. At multiple points the sentences will jar to a stop or end up be missing key words to make it flow right.Story Development - 3 -it doesnt seem like theres much of a plan at all, except "protect family. kill enemy." and whatever story is there feels patched together.Character Design - 2 -Not much to say there, typical OP MC that really is too dumb for his own good and is OP just to be OP.updating stability - 2 - none listed / week. granted there was a new update ~14hrs before posting this. Maybe it'll look up from here.World background- Legit feels like a ripoff of solo levelling meets latna: survival of a sword king.Overall i wouldnt say avoid this, but veteran readers be warned: this is a bit rough. Maybe it'll improve in the future, and if it does ill come back and edit this.
*this is god tier cover art I tell you author better not change the cover* and so yeah from what I've read it is indeed about mc transmigrating into the past and a game ai pretty much takes over the world like skynet from terminator but luckily it's a game system and not a defense system like skynet so the game system makes all currencies obsolete exept online currency of its game wont spoil too much guys just go and read it
This novel is very good. Recommend to read this. But do you know the most important thing about this novel? The length! Holy! I hope the word count doesn't go down if this gets picked.
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