The Gamer's System

Surprised to see how well written. I will be voting for this constantly to get it more notice hopefully he gets premium deal!  To the author thank you for the work keep it coming

This story is not only really well written but also contains a great storyline that hold many twists and turns. It is definitely worth a read.

Its a good read, the MC is cunning and clever. Every character has their own development. The story is interesting ,I never got bored while reading it.
ENJOY!!

The progress of the story is great and I have no problems about it. Can't wait for updates. It's not a harem which is good or bad, depends on your taste. The only problem I have is that it's sooooo addicting to read and it's not complete.

Message to Author:
I really hope there's a romance in this in story in the future, cause pure action/adventure is lonely....really lonely like some other novels where MC with no love interest, stories ending with MC dying or farming. Author-san I shall return in months to see the progress.

It’s my first novel so I don’t know.But it’s a great novel.It also got me hooked.There sometimes some mistakes in spellings or grammar but I can understand what it actually meant so that’s not a big deal and I completely recommend to read It .

Surprisingly good great writing I saw nothing to complain about Very good character development and the story is not too wrapped up in my point of view

It has a decent start that’s going somewhere.

Only problemS are within the grammar. Some sentences had minor problems.
The big problem however is that the Author mixes up his past and present tense.

This honestly puts me off as someone who grew up with English and it might affect my writing if i get into so imma stop reading.

My advice is to get software like grammarly or just get an editor but this is the author’s story so he can do whatever he wants.

Maybe in the future, I’ll come back to this.

The beginning started rather smoothly and nice but then it's a rush in turning the Mc into an OP Character with lot of holes missing key parts for the storry sadly also nothing new compared to other storrys