Daphne's own mate would have never treated his mate so horribly, but poor Tabitha gets stuck with trash Derek for a mate. She already had a horrible life growing up for Daphne and then gets a mate who treats her like crap for Daphne too. Let Tabitha find love elsewhere. A 2nd chance mate.
The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.
a great story i love it and i hope you don't drop that what will jake do to stefanie's parent i hope jakes hypnosis theme to make pamela wished hers husband peter to be a dominate husband who would make her a submisive cuckqueen ***slave, and peters hypnosis to become a submissive cuckold slave to be humiliated. and when Pamela start to fall in love with Jake and confesse all her dark secrets to Peter and he tells his dark secrets and he wisch that Pamela to seduce Jake. and when Jake movies in with all his slave and diceded to renovet the house he will alowe peter to stay as a servent and give hime a rom next to the master bedrom with a very thin wall with a One-way mirror and what humilateddeutice he as
WOW... It's recommended!At first, when I saw the cover, I think this is the story about an old grandpa... and soon after I read the synopsis, it hooked me... even more, after I read some chapters, it got my heart... will put it into my collection for sure... I will be waiting for more chapters...best of luck author..
author literally nerfed the MC power. There are several places where MC could've devoured the enemies power, but he didn't do it for no reason, his martial spirit could've easily reached to the highest stage possible. Don't come up with a concept that you can't implement fully. BS
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