would say I like this book so far, I am almost cought up to daily updates and the book gets better for sure, tho translation is very poor in some areas, as when you have a rare troop evolve into a rare troop and stays that way, so its confusing when reading, its a problem, also author tends to forget what character has gotten he has gotten a floating island with unlimited water and just hasent used it yet, IN THE DESERT, almost like author forgot character had it, or dosent want to acknowledge he has it. its also rough when pronouns are just switched every sentence, from he to she, makes the reading very inconsistent.but other than some continuity errors and bad translation/grammer, its an awesome story so far. so if you can get over those 2 things I would definitely pick it up
I really like this novel!!!! So much! I really get insulted when i read this novel! Im. From chemistry department but until now i still not make a paper that accept. I already read until chapter >100 and the story is good, Eventhough i didn't understand about the research (like carbon nanotube, Theory number, ect) 😂 i really get insulted when i read this!!! Hahaha
I actually found this on wattpad, but since you can't exactly write reviews on there, I'll do that here. This book is wonderful, addicting, and written very well. It is a binge-worthy webnovel. There is no sudden influx of face-slapping has a steady pace that is lowkey killing me at this point because I want to know what happens next.
Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?
The way the scenes and actions are described is really detailed as if the events were actually experienced by the author himself and was just retelling it to us readers. It was a cool experience!!!
Really love the rustic setting of the story and the various textual references weaved within the words. It has been an amazing read so far, the fast-building tension in the plot also compelled me to grow somewhat of an affinity with the main character. Definitely deserves more love, wishing this guy the best of luck with his future works.
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