The first one

My heart bleeds while reading this. I really bonded with the main character. Worth the time.

Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

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The premise is simple, yet interesting and fun.  The magical realism elements really work.  Keep up the good work author, good stuff for sure.

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Likeable MC that transmigrates to another world that has cultivation, alchemy and other fantastical elements. It is also has a school academy setting....at least for now and a touch of young unrequited love...at least for now. Every so often when I compare it to the actual translated novels on Webnovel, I find it more entertaining and is more prone to vote for it with my power stones. I hope others give this story a chance....Maybe read it for 15 or 20 chapters and hopefully you'll add it to your library to encourage this author to continue on writing this story.

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A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.