Keep up the good work a very good read so far will add another review later down the line. Happy to see that it is not your typical starting point and adding different world cultures in it.
Story has a good premise to it. The main character is pretty well developed. Would like to see more of world development though, since it's leaving to much to the imagination of the reader but overall not too much.
Keep on writing the more you write the more you will look like a creator hahah I like the novel. I love this kind of novels hahaahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhaahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaahhahahahhahahahahhahahahhahah
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Nice novel, although is isn't the best its still impressive. Love this type of genre, at first I hated the games genre because it was repetitive (check any games novel at the top), however I always liked kingdom building and combining the two genre crated something new I really enjoyed. The humour is a good addition, please continue with it!
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Keep up the good work author
Just try to keep updates stable xd
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