THE FATED HEIR

This was very interesting. I hope you continue. I enjoyed the fact that you were creative by using the idea of Ten to defend yourself so he can use his quirks, you were very creative. I wonder if you could maybe allow him to combine Nen with QUirk, so he can use Ten and his Quirk to defend himself, almost like an ultimate defense, basically like Gaaras Sand armor, but it's with creation flames. Otherwise, I enjoyed this and I hope you continued.

this is great the writing skills and backstory are percet ..................................................................................

Muy buena historia, el desarrollo del mismo es muy interesante y transmite muy bien lo que quiere expresar.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

"I think you've already noticed that the windows have no glass protection," Jeric yells while stepping harder on the glass pedal. "Attack those monsters, you bunch of idiots! WHAT IS THIS, A JOYRIDE?!"

"Well, everything has some magic, and my spell drains that."

Mey-Rin. Now, Mey-Rin.

"I know." (Jack)

He glanced at us and kept on walking inside, without a care in the world.