Leaving this review because I am in love with your book author. I know many people are not reading it yet but don't lose hope. It's going to be a blast.
I haven't read the novel. I also like many others clicked simply because it looks like Subaru wearing a Dragon ball god of destruction garment with a pocket dimension in his hand that is holding Marvel's Galactus
When will this book get full release......Oh my gosh!!!!! I have and will spent ALL my Energy Stone on this Book for Now!!!!!⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡
I see nothing wrong bc it such a great, great. At first I thought it was one of those simple and similar BL but this one was quite different. Maybe it’s bc I haven’t read a lot more yet but this is a great piece that I enjoy very much.
Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;.Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development.Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.
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