The Extra's Survival

This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star.
I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments

My favourite book right now. The reason I wake up in the morning

I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.

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I enjoyed reading this book, it keeps the readers Reading. my only problem is with the grammar. I look forward to reading future chapter that you put out.

Have a nice day author San

I loved reading it before as he tried to remain low key and didn't go into troubles... but then he started saving people, do that save slaves and its fking frustrating to see the character you like change into a fking cliche hero character... sorry i dropped this due to this

Thank for the beautiful story Author. I like the world and characters you created. And i hope you would until the very end. Stort is a bit slow-paced but i like the way you write except grammar. But i too am not a native English speaker so i am not affected. But you can take and editor. Therea are some readers who wants to do it and if you create discord you can communicate and take their help. And i want to ask do you think about increasing the daily updates. Even though not everyday once in a while could be very good for us readers. Again thanks for the story and i hope you continue the writinh until the end .

Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.

Thanks for this book author. I like very much your book. And i hope you don't stop writing. And you mentioned about harem and i think one Fl is enough. But is your work and your choose. Don't let people affect your thoughts. Write the story you wanted to share. I also want to ask dou you any plan of increasing the daily updates to two. Not everyday but if you do it occasionally i would be appreciated. [img=update]

What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.

inconsistent is how i would describe this story . Main character says something but does something else  He wishes to stay out of trouble but gets himself into it. Tries to sacrifice his life for school in which he has 2 friends he has known for a week or so ? Condemns slavery and goes to burn their business yet talks about that he is weak and should stay low. Don't read unless you are into japnese white knight novels

I like your work Author and hope you don't stop writing until the very end. But i think you shouldn't write one fight with many chapter. Max 3 ideal and if you would increase it is killing the hype. It is just a thought and you shoul write your own story. I hope i can see the end of this beautiful story. Again thanks for the book.