The Extra's Dominance

There were some capitalization errors and punctuation errors but other than that it was nice to read. The system having an attitude issue is also funny and refreshing to see. Also I think a lot of authors here can relate to the beginning

I have a feeling this your novel is gonna be successful. But there are something's I pinpointed when reading, the tenses you used are kind of confusing, that's all. I hope you correct them for the future.
Well nothing much to say but: Welcome to the World of Authors!

I've read a few chapters and it's very interesting. This is my first time reading such a novel I mean cole gets to leave his novel.
        Thumbs up to the author, nice one.

This is definitely a good read. Being pulled into your own novel? now that's some thrilling kick-ass book right here . The character design is stable, and the story development is quite good too. Though the author still needs to work on the writing quality for it is essential , but overall this novel is a hit!

Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!

Just another great book I came across this month in Webnovel. Author has a really significant skill to make the fiction feel real that I felt like I was right there in the story!

Everyone thanks for the support!

Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better.

Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel!

And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work.

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