The Extra Villain's Second Chance: A Hero's System

I read it further on another website and the mc is a idiot of the highest order. Later on he even gets raped from a female who was under an aphrodisiac and she blackmails him to take responsibility. After that he simps after her. The author writes the whole time in fight scenes that further talking is useless but they still talk further for whole 3 paragraphs or so. Then the only reason he use the swordmans class is because he wants to be handsome. Every other country they fight is losing and annihilated. If he had used the mage class he could use the upgrades more useful for mass destruction for more exp

that's a good book... but you should update more.

A decent original story. The great is kn pointbeith minimal mistakes. Characters are decently fleshed out. still kinda early to say too much though. MC isn't a virgin beta male who blushes while talking or girls. cant say much for updating stability yet cuz it's too early. world background I'd the in thing I have to criticize. since it's a fituristos setting, I would like better descriptions of the surrounding and whatnot. the author kinda skips that part. otherwise, it's a dope novel.

I don’t like romance nor female lead, although it seems you have male lead too (unless I read that wrong). Your story has potential and interesting, especially since you have a mystery aspect to it. The mystery is what brings people into the story. You have grammar mistakes, especially a lot of places that need commas. Remember, commas make a difference and the story flow better. Without the commas, it is like everything is together. Other than that, your story has potential, keep up the good work!

I like the book. The story is nice. .. Need to add more chapters faster.... I like it. Fun and easy read

Then, he walked around of the city, and stopped hotel, how he picked a room for rest later and let he "Berrante" and the sound box there, taking only his flute. Before that, he goes to a bakery how he saw when he was going to the hotel.Entering there, he sit on a chair and the waitress came and ask for him if he want something:

Thus, Yin Pools were formed. These training sites were favored by body cultivators who would submerge themselves in the basins in order to temper their bodies. By raising their resistance to the yin energy, they would not only physically strengthen themselves, but also increase their defense against yin-type attacks.

"You're already awake huh? Time for you to see the doctors, gotta make sure you're nice and healthy for the work we've got lined up for you. Heh."