Hello! Author here again ^_^ Just a quick heads up, if you already saved them for offline reading, there are some bugs you might encounter. It was because I am still editing the chapters and the app would show the downloaded chapters first before the updated version.The only way to fix it is to go to your settings and look for the Webnovel App. After that, clear the cache and data so the chapters that were saved would be removed and the updated ones will be shown. Sorry for the troubles but I'm trying to polish my book even more because I am still finding little errors here and there and I'm trying to improve readaility. Thanks again and I hope you continue to support me! ^_^
Author Now You Are Failing Us With Zachary Annoying Relationship....I Don't Even Know Why You Introduced A Relationship In The First Place... Zachary Clearly Does Not Know Anything About Romantic Relationship And Having A Gf He Is Not Even Putting Efforts In It...Now It Developing Into A Drama Troupe
The book is awesome. It shows romance very well and it is also fun to see all the interactions between all the different couples and I love the concept of also focusing on the side character's love stories as well. There is also the element of comedy in the book which makes the book super entertaining and fun to read. The MC (our MC) is also not a dense idiot who cannot figure out the opposite person's feelings and is actually quite the opposite and has an 'ability' that allows him to read the atmosphere and act accordingly. While doing so he can also tell when a girl is dropping hints either to him or others. This makes the story very fun and satisfying to read. However there is one thing that is bad about the book and it is the upload schedule. But other than that, there are no other things that I could find that would discourage me from reading the book. Overall, I completely recommend reading the book.
If your new to web novels you will probably like this novel. those of you like me who have read dozens this novel probably isn't for you. The best way I would describe it is everything seems really shallow at best. it has no depth to it and the writing is subpar compared to most decent novels. Every sentence has to much or to little. With the writer adding completely pointless info into almost everything. just one example being "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought in his mind as he went threw this knowledge." is there a need to add in his mind. can't be "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought as he sorted out the information he received." idk maybe the writer thinks most people are to stupid to figure out that thought takes place in the mind and we cant make that connection without reading it. that's just a small example. Wouldn't be a big deal except you find things like that in almost every sentence and paragraph. Every time he thinks to himself his names long chen but anytime he talks to someone or vise versa it's long tian. another problem instead of using pronouns like he, him, his they use long chen almost every single time. long chen got up in the morning as long chen looked in the mirror. long chen thinking to himself yada yada yada like that. its unbelievably frustrating. Pick a name and stop using it so much it seems like the author believes every time they do there saving a childs life.
I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story. First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities. Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players.Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter.In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.
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