The plot is very intriguing and cleverly delivered. The first chapter was enough to pique one's curiosity and leave us wanting more! Great job! Definitely something I'd recommend!
The story is interesting and promising. The concept of the story is very detailed. Even the world that the author created is perfectly depicted. Easy to understand, but rich with flavour.
All I can say is that it would be better, I think, if you can use less "he" and change it into something less redundant like "The naked boy," or "the Bloke" or something else. Aside from that, I find it very amazing to see this concept inside a doomsday world.
Author here,
I'm trying to go through another phase of my writing
This is another genre far different from the first book I'm writing
Do well to tell me if it's going well
You are so organized in your writing. :) The prelude set the world background and history. I could imagine what has been going on in the book's world. I highly suggest everyone to read the prelude first.
You are really detailed and I am really glad to see how careful you are in writing. No grammar and spelling lapses.
It felt like watching a movie. You are amazing. ^_^
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All I can say is that it would be better, I think, if you can use less "he" and change it into something less redundant like "The naked boy," or "the Bloke" or something else. Aside from that, I find it very amazing to see this concept inside a doomsday world.
I'm trying to go through another phase of my writing
This is another genre far different from the first book I'm writing
Do well to tell me if it's going well
You are really detailed and I am really glad to see how careful you are in writing. No grammar and spelling lapses.
It felt like watching a movie. You are amazing. ^_^