The Endless Hollow

I turned around just as the last book went back to the shelf and walked to the sofa to lay down. The stress of having a rebellious successor can take down even hero, huh.

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I couldn;t miss that black makr by those thick lashes. James??

The author is hard working and put a lot of effort into her book which is really interesting. What I dislike about the Novel is about the writing clarity.Like this scene. "do not forget I your father!" said her father.I think describing the father would work on such a scene

I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?

I practice the Dao of Shamelessness!You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know?They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?

Author you're toying with my emotions. Ian keeps pushing me to the edge!!