An awesome zombie story, Mark is an amazing, down to earth character, and I look forward to seeing him survive this apocalypse! As well as making his mark on the world!
I try to on my own pace and try to release atleast one chapter everyday. I like to increase or decrease the pace of the story depending on the moment of the characters. With a big background for the MC, he might be a bit confusing in the beginning but will get clearer as time goes on.
END IS HERE...oh I like that... author improved his grammar compared to his previous novel...and grammar mistakes are little to none. Nice starting, so far good. It's a type of novel which action mixed with lite gore(I am not of fan of it though). So far story is normal and no plottwists or something make it say wow. but it's nice novel. World background is same as modern so there's nothing to say but author writing about surroundings is good. Character development is nice and like that MC don't become douche bag after apocalypse started like mc in god and devil world. Hope that he won't become douchebag. Nice work author.
Alright i read 20 chapters in, and yeah its quite solid especially with the author clarifying its their first rodeo i believe. Now its not without its faults, lets get the big hurdle out of the way, the main character is a big mary sue. Not really a spoiler as around 18 chapters in its revealed hes had "sword and gun training" and that he was " a genius" who quit because he found it boring. Not to mention his perfect figure and attractive features the first chapter in.
Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.
It’s a good book, but the grammar puts me off a bit. The MC is a Gary sue (super handsome, genius, fighting expert) and is contradictory so that’s kinda bad. I still like it, and would continue to read it if it got proofread.
The story is any different from other Apocalypse novels but grabs your attentions that should explain how well its written, The authors is able to hold your attention by suspence of what will happen next and what will be Mark's choice.
Read atleast the first 15 chaps before you judge the book
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I try to on my own pace and try to release atleast one chapter everyday. I like to increase or decrease the pace of the story depending on the moment of the characters. With a big background for the MC, he might be a bit confusing in the beginning but will get clearer as time goes on.
Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.
Read atleast the first 15 chaps before you judge the book