It is a great story. The author is not a pro, but does a great job trying to get things right. Story development is only slow because of the posting rate. World background could use a little work, but it is understandable and clear enough to give you a feeling it is there. Character development is slow but thats do to yhe chaotic nature of the character. i enjoy this book and hope it continues.
This fifth man had swung his large blade at Gray's back previously. Now the previous man swung his short blade back towards Gray. Gray blocked the swing with his sword and picked up the sheath he had just thrown and swung it at the mans leg. The man was hit in the leg and fell on his side. Gray kicked him in the abdomen.
Pumasok si Sir Mendel. "Goodmorning, class! I can see na marami-raming new student. We can start by introducing yourselves." Nakangiti si sir. Mukhang nang-aasar dahil sino nga ba naman ang may gusto sa walang katapusang self-introduction?
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