Cool idea but in my opinion totally ruined it with the multiple protagonists but that’s just my personal bias given that it’s got the library of heaven’s path i can’t give it a lower rating than a 3.
Overall great story! However there are a few problems such as grammar mistakes. But tbh its not that much of a big deal. Although i do have a few problems with the character development. This is just my personal preferences but i just wish Ace(MC) had more freedom...instead of his grandmother controlling him/making his decisions every single time. I mean I understand that he is young, therefore you might have limited his freedom...but his IQ and EQ is astronomically high so he should be more mature than others anyways....Another thing is that his grandmother has all the power and authority but i just wish she had a better personality...I only read until ch35 so i may be wrong but the mc's only parent seems to be his grandmother why is she being so manipulative. *This is just my personal preferences so flame me if you want, but i wont change my mind on this. Anyways You do you Mr Author. I'm just one of the many readers you had, but i'm afraid i'll be dropping this novel. Peace out ma dudes!
That sad moment where your only rating after two weeks is from a random copypasta that went out to just about every fiction. Summary of NPC69’s life in a nutshell.
Maybe I'm biased but I quite like virtual reality gaming books, and this one has a unique twist in that its not based on some fantasy real but on the real world. I don't think I've ever seen a book do something like this and its so cool.Imagine all the places that will be added in the future too! Imagine chernobyl landscape where they have to fight mutated monsters or they discover cthulhu underwater and they have to go in and nerf him. Okay maybe I'm getting too excited, but imagine the possibilities! There's far too few chapters to get the full picture right now but what I see is good. The grammar and details are all there too, i'd really love to see if they go on to have bigger weapons like tanks, missile launchers, sniper rifles etc but thats for later chapters. Author should update more XDKeep up the good work
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