I give five star to translation quality and updates, I give poor rating to story development and world background. why? First time I read this novel, instantly I'm in love with it. so i decide to look for the raw. But what greet me isn't something beautiful, remember Dr. Strange vs Dormamu scenes in marvel movie? thats how it feels when reading this novel, you have been put in a time loop! Yes, this novel selling points is only repetitive story about "what kind of reaction the customer will make when...
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OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.
"Yep, he's a little smartass that what he is. Ah but it's ok for you guys, he only acts like that with people he's close to, like his family members. He should be quite respectable towards strangers."
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