I love the story plot, the way the MC create new skills, almost everything is fine, except for all the guild matters, how is even posible that all the guilds are "famous" and they have ranks like general, colonel, lieutenant and they guild didnt even exist or at least they are not created yet, thus dont make any sense, also they talk about pro players but no Esport from RML exist, the way that you are developing the guild matters are like the way described in the king's avatar, but there, they have an Esport for background, there is no way that every player know from which guild belong which player because the guilds are not created yet, you can say that you are from X famous guild and they have to believe you, this do not make any sense, also every guild member act like a Chinese sect and is so boooooring in that way, we want a story about a cultivator in a video game vs normal people or even skilled people that are a world champion in X martial art or X discipline like archery or something like that not another wuxia story with boring sect things
Husband: Honey, I invited a friend home for dinner.Wife: What? Are you crazy? The house is a mess, all the dishes are dirty, and I can't cook meal.Husband: I know all that.Wife: Then why did you invite the friend?Husband: Because the poor fool is thinking about getting married.
Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well😭😭._my favorite line is "Nike is using his jaywalking skills to the maxium" hilariously funny._characters well presented😇_the 2 chapter at the beginning have me naruto vibes😂😂As for suggestions there's none really but keep your story understandable when it comes to action parts.
A very well done story with interesting concepts. I hope this gets picked up by webnovel. Lit will be interesting to see the power creep since he starts off so strong.
Great Novel! One of the best novels I've read and of the first ones I finished. The translation was a bit messy at times, but the speed more than made up for it, haha
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
Cerita ini sangat menarik, tetapi pengembangan konflik antara tokoh utama dan tokoh perempuan kurang menarik. Buatlah konflik yang sedikit lebih rumit untuk mendapatkan seorang perempuan untuk tokoh utama, agar cerita dapat berkembang lebih menarik. Thanks for the story. 😁😀😊💖💖💖💖👍👍👍👍
Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.
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