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  1. minatoflashsBX
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    The main character is not ruthless. He's a scum who kills and tortures innocent people. He stirred up the country, and then ordered the execution of half the population JUST LIKE that! Too proud, too stupid. Underline, STUPID! He does not think through the steps in advance, for which he gets in the balls. And then the degenerate gets angry and destroys the street of homeless people. Also, the author did not really understand the capitalist system and says that his" great " country, the United States, is at the peak of its power. Fucking it is not at the peak of power, capitalism leads to the degradation of the population and self-destruction of the country ©Karl Marx. One of the" comrades " of the main character said that the USA was built on bones, blood and innocent deaths, said that there is no OTHER WAY! * 10 seconds later* I need world peace!!! But in the USSR, people did not cut each other's throats and lived more than perfectly. ###Yes, I know that under the USSR there was socialism. I know it's banned in the United States, but who's stopping you FROM just READING?### Pretends to be cool, constantly bragging, but in fact is only an empty place.
  1. Abyss0813
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    Spoiler alert : Dont read this due to this sites money grabbing antics. You cant read this without spirit stones and chapters dont unlock without spending.
  1. septimus_heap7
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  1. WeaverOfLies
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  1. AngelyDarky
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    while slow it is by far one of the best chat group stories i have read love your work keep it up :) only thing i could hope for is a faster realease but as a writer myself understand both how hard and potentialy unhealthy that is but none the less love you work :)
  1. Lucky00
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    Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want.Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.
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  1. deradamsel
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