The Demon Against the Heavens

Found another hidden gem ! This novel deserve my spirit stones ! Oh i'm so happy with myself ^^
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I dropped this novel, the story have a good premise, but the way the author writhes makes me puke blood. The POV change so much that i want to punch the screen and with the number of flashbacks combined you could write another book. Every chapter there is a change is the pov that totaly breaks the flow of the story. The protagonist is the self-image of every tenage shonen manga protagonist and his sister is anoying as well. Good luck with the novel and hope you improve your skills

Hi, everyone!

I've already read the first book of this novel in Italian language and I really Love it!
I can assure that the story will gets better and better even if it starts a bit slowly, it has a truly unique plot so if you are looking for something different give it a try!
I think it's a must read in my humble opinion! :)

One of the worst stories i read in a long time.filled with plot armour.the mc is partially dumb and retarded with feeling almost similar to ****** towards his sister who is a cocky,ungrateful,b*tch.  If you are going to read this i warn you - the author has a very weird and twisted sense of love .

This novel is a perfect mix of standard chinese novels with immortals and videogame-like life.
This novel has a level system with abilities, classes and so on like a videogame
Helial is a poor teenager that lives with little sister all by themselves in a small town since she was a newborn. He works to gain some money to be able to mantain his sister and him, he also train to become stronger so that he can improve his sister's life.
They have a bigger brother that abandoned them.
One day Helial got cursed by a mysterious sword that reduced his strenght stat to 0.05x. After that...
This is just a summary of the first 1 or 2 chapters to let you know the background
In my opinion this novel is just beautiful, well written and the character design is superb, if you start you will not be able to stop reading, the first chapters have a lot of flashbacks, then the story starts and becomes better and better.
I also love the fact that some historical and mythological characters are revised and present in the novel

Pretty weak story with horrible characters.Mc gets random power ups and passes every impossible fight just by thinking of his sister and getting plot armor.Wierd disgusting ****** relationship between mc and his 10 years old.Constant flashbacks with no relevant info in the middle of a chapter for no reason.

The way the author forces in flash back in basically every chapter is seriously annoying. It just breaks the flow of the whole story and makes it all seem awkward just to dump in info, and sometimes the info is useless. I rather you make a few chapters at the start to do the info dumping, and provide the background of the world than forcing bits and peices of it everywhere. In general, the plot is progressing slowly, with some bs here and there but its ok if you want to pass time

I like the story but the author gave me headache.
Every chapter have a flash back like when you are watching na/eu actions like 'arrow' or 'the flash'. And its annoying, well i can read up to 7 to 9 hours straight but with this novel...uhm i can't... Too many details to process in one chapter.

Its worth giving it a try i guess. Maybe its just me who hates this kind of format. Well, thats it.. I hope thats for an honest review..