The Debutant’s Surprise: A Blast from the Past

OMG!!! This story is really meng ❤️❤️❤️ How I was I was little pudding, being able to embrace that male god is simply heaven... hahaha 😂 jk. But really the story is great.

This book is a bunger. I love, I just hope the author doesnt drop it. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}:::::::::::"""""""""""""?????seytg resj

This book is executed poorly. First of all author introduce the world as new and diffrent than Earth yet all that changed are names and maybe borders of some kingdoms. It would be better to keep names and continents of Earth. Here we get just diffrent naming slighlty diffrent map (So far we got India UK+ 2 kingdoms fighting over giblartar strait) MC is transmigrated as a Prince of island that resembles UK. If u make new world at least try to make it truly new. Another problem is with storytelling:MC wokes up as a Prince and stright up goes to his father shows his ideas and always get approval to implement them. There is no reaction to his sudden change, no reaction of his surrondings shown. There are no obstacles to aby of his actions. The world is bland and does not feel alive. We have minimal side characters and if they are introduced its only by giving name and they are used as tools to carry orders. Whole book is basycly introducing reforms and tech and talking to his father about them over and over again. And we never get reactions of the ppl affected by them.Another issue is with unrealistic timelines and unclear time skips. For example building a university in less than 8 months using late medival technology.Very disappinting.

Being betrayed must hurt a lot, but I mean it, this story is really good, the pacing also feels natural and not rushed, The content of the story is also interesting, remains enthusiastic, and is always consistent.