The Dark Warlock

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"I'm not hungry Killian. I have finished my initial meal," I replied.

Writing to get an answerForeword: what im going to say is constructive critisism not hate.Im at chapter 54 now and really enjoying reading it so far, but i feel like when you are describing several thing be it monsters or people the descriptions seem so lacking, like i get not wanting too many words becuase of word limit and price, but it dosent really take many words to give a bit more of a detailed description. For example where im at noe is the part with shadow stalkers and weavers and the description of the weavers is fine i have envisiond what they look like, but same cant be said for the shadow stalkers, with the very limeted/lacluster description we got from them i cant for the love of me envision what its supposed to look like. Im saying this because i want to keep reading, and for all i know it might improve in future chapters, but so far it pains me because i love painting a about what im reading when im reading, with this now(for the most part at least) im unable to do so.

Revenge on those that mocked him? 😂 who told him to be manaless? All of this author be forcing revenges sigh