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a good beginning but the mc is not ruthless enough for someone who wants to go againts the heavens. ┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)
Well I can finally say that this novel is just like the other 100 or so Chinese novels out there on this site right now, I started reading this because a review said that the characters had purpose, that the antagonists had character and that the MC solved problems through intellect and didn't needlessly kill, but as of this chapter I can safely say that none of these things are true. The main character has received a grand total of 5 deus ex machinas and 7 random coincidences already in the FIRST 21 Chapters. He retardedly killed 3 people related to the CROWN PRINCE, and he is the exact opposite of intelligent by not realizing how rare things from a higher dimension are to mortal people. Not only that he has coincidenced upon 4 "insanely powerful relics" that can boost cultivation in the first 21 chapters. A story is that has no ******* because the author will just drop free stuff in the MC's lap is not a good story.
The best novel I have ever read. Recently I was looking for novels related to streaming modeling (etc etc) and this was just the perfect fit for all of that. It makes me sad that I caught up since I still want more but nonetheless this is a great novel I 100% reccomend it.
when i first started this i didnt mind the mvp copy thingy but when i got into later parts of the story it gets shorten so much like i just started reading a new chap and it just end and rate at the chapters are getting released i think it should atleast be longer
I just love this story ... Please please please update next chapter as soon as possible.. ^^~I feel like I kinda fell in love with aika even if she is just a novel character haha ❤ I want to know what's next going to happen in her life ..so please update it ^^~
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