The Dark Demon Lord

So this is my second novel and is (in my opinion) the better of the the two. Please give me feedback as to what you think about it and what you wish to see. I have also read many novels and know the basic concerns of many readers.

If you any of you guys are wondering, my first novel is also in a state of incomplete and will be getting updated by me. However, I will be focusing on this novel more then my first. But if you would like to check it out, you can go to Wattpad and search for the book title, "The Lost Shadow", it will be under a similar pen name. If views on my other novel increase and it becomes something people start to like then I will continue that novel as well.

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Words cant describe how good a book is you have to read it and since everyone is different some might not like this but i personally recommand this and support it with ur stones as the story is nice and is frequently updated by the author
** if you read though my entire comment then wow thanks for reading i guess

I think that your writing is great! Although I am poor and can’t support you on Patreon, I have voted for this novel with all my spare accounts. I hope you continue this awesome story and release more chapters! I usually don’t read originals because I’m afraid that if I find a good story and the author stops writing my fragile heart can take it. Please don’t do that to me, because I am already very attached

The term evil differs with what the society constitutes as evil and it differs from one society to another. What one considers as good may be bad for another. Personaly i dont find the mc to be " evil " but he sure is stupid as f**k. The mc is protrayed to have millions of years of experience in his previous life. So even if the mc is born with an iq of 20, with accordance to his lifespan he should have considerable amount of intelligence by the time his age hit 1million. Yet the MC in his second life is completely acting without prudence and common sense !!. Patience, wisdom, intelligence, cunningness, disregard of life, prudence, serenity, presence of mind, sense of self are some characteristics that could develop wr to time. The MC had Time, lots of it. Yet he lacks the qualities that corresponds to his claimed "hundred million years of life experience ". Mr.Author, i dont know if my ramblings would hurt you. But, kindly take my review in to consideration when u create a story like this. I dont find many faults except character design.

Intresting story. I hope it will stay like that in later chapters. I think it would have been better if you used china names like Yi Xiao Yun Feng Zhao Chu Che Lin Ling and other. I just read so many china novels its wierd to see different names.

Will MC keep his ruthlessnes from his past life?
I dont want him to be soft hearthed.

I just love how evil is the mc if you’re not into violent bloodthirsty and ruthless then it’s not for you I like how introduce the characters but I don’t like that much the it all mc sometimes it annoys me as for writing quality English is not my main language but I find it pretty easy to read continue like that author-san I love your story

Waste of time. MC is a family man when it comes to mommy, sister and daddy, but just kills random people over stupid crap like wanting a tour guide.  That isn't even a good demon lord, that's just a psycho MC who you can't even like. Dude can break a kid's arm over an interuption, kill families and scheme in the dark like a rat, then wants to bow his head down to mama and papa over everything. Lived for millions of years, made this world, was sad over losing his loved ones, then he himself inflicts that same pain on random people for nothing at all. I don't understand how crappy someone can be when developing character, but this author wins lol.  He is either a demon lord aka 100% evil, or some b.s family/demon lord where he kills enemies but is at least tolerant to strangers like he was with the village elder and those girls. Why didn't he become evil then? They mean ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO HIM. His behavior is such a joke based on this bad writing. But you managed to turn him into some psycho. Random people fighting against a beast, let's scheme to kill them all, muahaha. No, that is just shìtty writing. This is the so called demon lord? Seriously? A mommy's boy one chapter, a crazy MC who kills random people for nothing at all the next? Yeah, dropping this confusing pile of dog turd. And it's been out for 4 damn months and we're just on chapter 79? No thanks. Slow ass updates.

..Shitty of the ****tiest mc, a million year old demon lord reincarnates and all of a sudden becomes retarded, can barely cultivate, can’t fight for ****, can’t use his experience from past life in anything useful and most of all he panics everytime somebody attacks him instead of being the million year old demon lord...
If it wasn’t cause of having nothing else to read I wouldn’t bother forcing myseöf to sit through this shitty cringefest which makes me literally scream out loud and smash something cause of how retarded mc is
Over and out, don’t read unless you got a spare phone cause you might smash yours