You should add more spaces and sEperate thr longer paragrahs to make it easier to read. Long paragraphs are painful too read and quickly cause the reader to lose interest Otherwise great story!
I really like the plot of the story, continue with the chapters, I hope I can read more of it, please upload more chapters since we are quarantined in some countries, you can also do a mass release
Hello! Author here! Honestly, I don't know what I should write. Since I am author, it's obvious that I would exaggerate a bit :D Well just look at the score ^^ So let's go with some info! English is not my first language, I am sure that's noticeable. I hope that story is at least at the 'readable' level. Then, it's my first time writing a story. You know, I am quite a lazy person, so writing everyday to provide at least 1 chapter a day is hmmm I would say nice training to cure my laziness. Anyway! I hope you guys are enjoying IRTD!
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